Wow. I just read through your writing. You blew my socks off! I would love to type out everyone’s work here, but I only have time to publish a few excerpts. Keep up the great work, and check out all the verbs below!
“…Water slowly drips off my chin as I prepare to charge off the bright blue diving board. I slowly accelerate my speed and I jump off the very tip of the diving board. The water sparkles below me as the cool air brushes my hair. I point my hands at the deep blue water as I gain speed. I penetrate the layer of water like a knife cutting butter…”
“My imagination twisting and winding…I grab my sketch book and I start curving and moving my hand. I start to see a face…”
“I love the feeling of smoothly strumming the strings.
Also my hand clutching the neck, those fingers sore from pressing on the strings.
Then switching fret to fret, string to string.
The sweet sound of music fills the air.”